I wrote a few Boss tips of Dead Space on a site and I would like you guys to look at it and review it please

Dead Space 2 Review -

http://swiftor.com/f25/dead-space-2-good-sequel-hit-game-its-plot-twists-34697/

Dead Space Leviathan Tips -

http://swiftor.com/f63/dead-space-leviathan-tips-spoilers-37053/

Dead Space Hive Mind Tips -

http://swiftor.com/f63/dead-space-hive-mind-tips-spoilers-37018/

Thank you!